Jeon hae-rim harvard university

HI EVERYONE! PLEASE help me xD if you have time, kindly read this story of mine,
"One Last Chance" I would say, Chapter 1 is a crap but Chapter2 is worth reading. though Ch.1 is still important. SORRY for this plug..
READ+VOTE+COMMENT(negative/positive) is very welcome ^_________^ http://www.wattpad.com/story/1252758-one-last-chance